Rearrange your sentence so what ever is doing the action is stated before you state what they are doing. EX: The truck was ran into by the car.
The car is doing the action, yet we put it behind what it was doing. This is making the truck the subject instead of the car.
If we arrange to make the acting noun the subject the sentence becomes more precise. EX: The car ran into the truck.
The sentence is simper, and the train of thought flows with what is happening in the sentence. I hope this is a better description and explanation than last weeks.
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