One important tool of concise sentencing is to, "(1)eliminate unnecessary intensifiers." In most of my writing I try to emphasise my point by adding these. So in future writing I am going to look for ways to eliminate the over use of emphasis intensifiers, while trying to convey my point. They make sentencing hard to follow and even some times distracting from what I am trying to say. Both reasons will affect the clarity of my point, rather than adding to it.
(1) Axelrod, Rise B., and Charles R. Cooper. The Saint Martin's Guide to Writing. 8th ed. Boston: Bedford/Saint Martin's, 2008.
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